I had great hopes for this. Unfortunately I was disappointed. It was technically competent, but the constant flashing back and forth slowed to a crawl what is, at its core, an adventure story.
Writing's a fight and this boy needs a battle
Writing's a fight and this boy needs a battle
I had great hopes for this. Unfortunately I was disappointed. It was technically competent, but the constant flashing back and forth slowed to a crawl what is, at its core, an adventure story.
Darrin // Nightingale 